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NotHereAnymore
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NOBODY knows how you feel... NOBODY beside you to understand you
... The day was a torture, you're now alone and the tears flow
You found a blade and you know what you gonna do... but you have a strange feeling
you scream "help" but NOBODY hear you and you know it...
but you scream again becuse you hope to someone hear you ... then you hear a voice and it say .......
scuzati-mi greselile gramaticale 
knd o termin voi posta si ce vroia sa zik vocea  |
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NotHereAnymore
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| Posted: Sunday - 02/03/2008 19:00 Post subject: |
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porțiunea a2a... si scz de dublul post
then the voice says "Trust me and I promise to you I will help you"
She: how can I trust you?
A shadow come to her
X: Just look into my eyes [says the shadow and coming to the girl]
The girl raise her face, stop crying and looked at the shadow
Actually the shadow was a girl very known
X: tell me what you see
She: I see peace and confidence... mixed with pain, helplessness and sadness and...
X: ... and?
She: ...I feel like I look into my soul
X: I know... 'cuz I am you
She: but...
X: I come here to stop you to do the biggest mistake of your life
She: Where do you know what I wanted to do?
X: I am you.. did you forgott?
She: no... but how can you be me?
X: I'm your conscience... actually I'm just in ur mind
She: Why I am thinking you?
X: Me... I mean you don't want to do the same mistake like your parents...
She: oh... then thank you
X: no problem... My "work" here is over ... bye
She: bye |
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YoYo
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| Posted: Sunday - 02/03/2008 22:33 Post subject: |
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wooo ce frumos 
super a fost dialogul asta cu ea insasi..cu vocea constiinetei 
bravo pt talent si nu e nik...fiekre mai greseste cate putin uneori e ok!
felicitari! 
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~cez_483~
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| Posted: Sunday - 02/03/2008 22:45 Post subject: |
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wow ce tare...
imi place dialogul dintre fata si constiinta ei...
prima parte...e prea tare...
e aproape ca in an deiner seite...sau ma insel?....
care e greseala ce e pe cale sa fie facuta?
oricum, felicitari...e foarte frumos:*:*:*
si astept o continuare 
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NotHereAnymore
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| Posted: Sunday - 02/03/2008 22:54 Post subject: |
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| ~cez_483~ wrote: |
e aproape ca in an deiner seite...sau ma insel?....
care e greseala ce e pe cale sa fie facuta?
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An deiner Seite ...  hmm
sincera sa fiu nici nu am (ink) versurile in romana 
greseala ar fi fost atunci knd a luat lama si (probabil) vroia sa isi taie venele
ms mult pt pareri fetelor >:D< |
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